Chanson:Down The Line

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Couplet 1 :
Two months alone in my head,
Now I’m wondering :
Was it even real ?
I don’t want you to disappear,
You have no idea how dangerous it feels to love you,
Because I never felt that safe with anyone,
And I don’t care if I’m going wild again,
I need your eyes to get lost in them,

Pré-refrain 1 :
And that day, your smile,
I could feel it in my bones,
So, tell me,
Is this all gone,
Or is there still a chance,
Even the tiniest one ?

Refrain 1 :
Was I supposed to resist,
Add barriers on the top of the distance ?
I know I shouldn’t love you,
But I didn’t mean to…

Couplet 2 :
What’s the point in watching the movie again ?
I already know the end,
And I’m just stuck on you,
Oh, can’t you feel you’re all I see,
When I close my eyes,
The only one I trust,
When I hate myself,
And stay up all night ?

Pré-refrain 2 :
And I couldn’t imagine
The first time you crossed my mind,
That panic would turn into overwhelm,
And overwhelm into softness,
And that your smile would undo me,
Oh, there’s no turning back…

Refrain 2 :
I’ve come too far to step back now,
And maybe that’s where I was supposed to go,
Straight into the mouth of the unknown,
And I fell on purpose,

Couplet 3 :
Now, I’m just sitting here,
My legs failing to support me,
And my eyes are betraying me
By filling up with tears,
I’m not giving up,
But I’m crying the very possibility of you
Reaching out for me,
Was it supposed to end so quietly ?

Pré-refrain 3 :
And I don’t know how to show you,
I need you to see,
What my lips can’t say,
I need you to feel,
What it means
When my eyes go wet.

Refrain 3 :
So, won’t you show up,
If I was craving your presence ?
Won’t you take me against you,
If I was craving safety ?

Outro :
I can’t just cross it out,
It’s still alive in every breath I draw,
And I won’t ask for your truth,
’Cause only truth hurts, right ?

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Syllabation De L'Écrit

Syllabes Hyphénique: Down The Line

cou=plet=un 3
two=months=a=lo=ne=in=my=head 8
now=im=won=de=ring 5
was=it=e=ven=real 5
i=dont=want=you=to=di=sap=pear 8
you=have=no=i=dea=how=dange=rous=it=feels=to=love=you 13
be=cause=i=ne=ver=felt=that=safe=wi=th=a=nyone 12
and=i=dont=care=if=im=going=wild=a=gain 10
i=need=your=eyes=to=get=lost=in=them 9

pré=re=frain=un 4
and=that=day=your=s=mi=le 7
i=could=feel=it=in=my=bo=nes 8
so=tell=me 3
is=this=all=go=ne 5
or=is=the=re=still=a=chan=ce 8
even=the=ti=niest=o=ne 6

re=frain=un 3
was=i=sup=po=sed=to=re=sist 8
add=bar=riers=on=the=top=of=the=dis=tance 10
i=k=now=i=shouldnt=lo=ve=you 8
but=i=didnt=mean=to 5

cou=plet=deux 3
whats=the=point=in=wat=ching=the=mo=viea=gain 10
i=al=rea=dy=k=now=the=end 8
and=im=just=stu=ck=on=you 7
oh=cant=you=feel=youre=all=i=see 8
when=i=clo=se=my=eyes 6
the=on=ly=o=ne=i=trust 7
when=i=ha=te=my=self 6
and=stay=up=all=night 5

pré=re=frain=deux 4
and=i=couldnt=i=ma=gi=ne 7
the=first=time=you=cros=sed=my=mind 8
that=pa=nic=would=turn=in=to=o=verw=helm 10
and=o=verw=helm=in=to=soft=ness 8
and=that=your=s=mile=would=un=do=me 9
oh=the=res=no=tur=ning=ba=ck 8

re=frain=deux 3
ive=come=too=far=to=step=ba=ck=now 9
and=may=be=thats=w=he=re=i=was=sup=po=sed=to=go 14
straight=in=to=the=mou=th=of=theunk=nown 9
and=i=fell=on=pur=po=se 7

cou=plet=trois 3
now=im=just=sit=ting=he=re 7
my=legs=fai=ling=to=sup=port=me 8
and=my=eyes=a=re=be=traying=me 8
by=fil=ling=up=wi=th=tears 7
im=not=gi=ving=up 5
but=im=crying=the=ve=ry=pos=si=bi=li=ty=of=you 13
rea=ching=out=for=me 5
was=it=sup=po=sed=to=end=so=quiet=ly 10

pré=re=frain=trois 4
and=i=dont=k=now=how=to=show=you 9
i=ne=ed=you=to=see 6
what=my=lips=cant=say 5
i=ne=ed=you=to=fe=el 7
what=it=means 3
when=my=eyes=go=wet 5

re=frain=trois 3
so=wont=you=show=up 5
if=i=was=cra=ving=your=pre=sence 8
wont=you=ta=ke=me=a=gainst=you 8
if=i=was=cra=ving=sa=fe=ty 8

ou=tro 2
i=cant=just=cross=it=out 6
its=still=a=livein=e=ve=ry=brea=th=i=draw 11
and=i=wont=ask=for=your=tru=th 8
cau=se=on=ly=tru=th=hurts=right 8

Phonétique : Down The Line

kuplε œ̃ :
two mɔ̃tz- alɔnə ɛ̃ mi əad,
nɔw iεm wɔ̃dəʁiŋ :
was it əvɛ̃ ʁəal ?
i dɔnte wɑ̃ iu to dizapəaʁ,
iu-avə no idəa ɔw dɑ̃ʒəʁusz- it fil to lɔvə iu,
bəkozə i nəve fεlt ta safə wit aniɔnə,
ɑ̃d i dɔnte kaʁə if iεm ɡuiŋ wild aɡɛ̃,
i nid iuʁ εj to ʒεt lɔst ɛ̃ tεm,

pʁe ʁəfʁɛ̃ œ̃ :
ɑ̃d ta dε, iuʁ smilə,
i kuld fil it ɛ̃ mi bɔnə,
so, tεll mə,
is tiz- al ɡɔnə,
ɔʁ is təʁə stij a ʃɑ̃sə,
əvɛ̃ tə tinjεst ɔnə ?

ʁəfʁɛ̃ œ̃ :
was i sypozεd to ʁəsist,
ad baʁjez- ɔ̃ tə tɔp ɔf tə distɑ̃sə ?
i knɔw i ʃuldnte lɔvə iu,
byt i didnte məɑ̃ to…

kuplε dø :
watεs tə pwɛ̃ ɛ̃ watʃiŋ tə mɔvi aɡɛ̃ ?
i alʁəadi knɔw tə εnd,
ɑ̃d iεm ʒyst styk ɔ̃n- iu,
ɔ, kante iu fil iuʁə al i si,
wɛ̃ i klozə mi εj,
tə ɔ̃li ɔnə i tʁyst,
wɛ̃ i-atə mizεlf,
ɑ̃d stε yp al niɡt ?

pʁe ʁəfʁɛ̃ dø :
ɑ̃d i kuldnte imaʒinə
tə fiʁst timə iu kʁɔsεd mi mɛ̃d,
ta panik wuld tyʁn ɛ̃to ɔvεʁwεlm,
ɑ̃d ɔvεʁwεlm ɛ̃to sɔftnεs,
ɑ̃d ta iuʁ smilə wuld œ̃do mə,
ɔ, təʁəεs no tyʁniŋ bak…

ʁəfʁɛ̃ dø :
ivə kɔmə tu faʁ to stεp bak nɔw,
ɑ̃d mεbə tatεs wəʁə i was sypozεd to ɡo,
stʁεɡt ɛ̃to tə mut ɔf tə œ̃knɔwn,
ɑ̃d i fεll ɔ̃ pyʁpozə,

kuplε tʁwa :
nɔw, iεm ʒyst sitiŋ əʁə,
mi lεɡ fεliŋ to sypɔʁ mə,
ɑ̃d mi εjz- aʁə bεtʁεjiŋ mə
bi fijiŋ yp wit təaʁ,
iεm no ʒiviŋ yp,
byt iεm kʁiiŋ tə vəʁi pɔsibiliti ɔf iu
ʁəaʃiŋ u fɔʁ mə,
was it sypozεd to εnd so kjεtli ?

pʁe ʁəfʁɛ̃ tʁwa :
ɑ̃d i dɔnte knɔw ɔw to ʃɔw iu,
i nid iu to si,
wa mi lip kante sε,
i nid iu to fil,
wa it məɑ̃
wɛ̃ mi εj ɡo wεt.

ʁəfʁɛ̃ tʁwa :
so, wɔnte iu ʃɔw yp,
if i was kʁaviŋ iuʁ pʁəzɑ̃sə ?
wɔnte iu takə mə aɡɛ̃st iu,
if i was kʁaviŋ safəti ?

utʁo :
i kante ʒyst kʁɔsz- it u,
itεs stij alivə ɛ̃ əvəʁi bʁəat i dʁaw,
ɑ̃d i wɔnte ask fɔʁ iuʁ tʁyt,
kozə ɔ̃li tʁyt yʁ, ʁajt ?

Syllabes Phonétique : Down The Line

ku=plε=œ̃ 3
two=mɔ̃t=za=lɔnə=ɛ̃=mi=ə=ad 8
nɔw=i=εm=wɔ̃=də=ʁiŋ 6
was=it=ə=vɛ̃=ʁə=al 6
idɔnə=te=wɑ̃=i=u=to=di=za=pəaʁ 9
i=u-avə=no=i=dəa=ɔw=dɑ̃ʒə=ʁus=zit=fil=to=lɔvə=i=u 15
bə=kozə=inə=ve=fεlt=ta=safə=wit=aniɔnə 9
ɑ̃d=idɔnə=te=kaʁə=if=i=εm=ɡu=iŋ=wild=a=ɡɛ̃ 12
i=nid=i=uʁ=εj=to=ʒεt=lɔst=ɛ̃=tεm 10

pʁe=ʁə=fʁɛ̃=œ̃ 4
ɑ̃d=ta=dε=i=uʁ=smi=lə 7
i=kuld=fil=it=ɛ̃=mi=bɔ=nə 8
so=tεll=mə 3
is=ti=zal=ɡɔ=nə 5
ɔʁ=is=tə=ʁə=stij=a=ʃɑ̃=sə 8
ə=vɛ̃=tə=ti=njεst=ɔ=nə 7

ʁə=fʁɛ̃=œ̃ 3
was=i=sy=po=zεd=to=ʁə=sist 8
ad=ba=ʁje=zɔ̃tə=tɔp=ɔf=tə=distɑ̃sə 8
i=knɔw=i=ʃul=dnt=lɔvə=i=u 8
byt=i=did=nte=mə=ɑ̃=to 7

ku=plε=dø 3
watεsə=tə=pwɛ̃=ɛ̃=wat=ʃiŋ=tə=mɔ=vi=a=ɡɛ̃ 11
i=al=ʁə=a=di=knɔw=tə=εnd 8
ɑ̃d=i=εm=ʒyst=styk=ɔ̃=ni=u 8
ɔ=kan=te=i=u=fil=i=uʁəal=i=si 10
wɛ̃=i=klo=zə=mi=εj 6
tə=ɔ̃=li=ɔ=nə=i=tʁyst 7
wɛ̃=i-a=tə=mi=zεlf 6
ɑ̃d=stε=yp=al=niɡt 5

pʁe=ʁə=fʁɛ̃=dø 4
ɑ̃d=i=kul=dnt=i=ma=ʒi=nə 8
tə=fiʁst=timə=i=u=kʁɔ=sεd=mi=mɛ̃d 9
ta=pa=nik=wuld=tyʁn=ɛ̃=to=ɔ=vε=ʁwεlm 10
ɑ̃d=ɔ=vε=ʁwεlm=ɛ̃=to=sɔf=tnεs 8
ɑ̃d=ta=i=uʁ=smilə=wuld=œ̃=domə 8
ɔ=tə=ʁə=εsə=no=tyʁ=niŋ=bak 8

ʁə=fʁɛ̃=dø 3
ivə=kɔmə=tu=faʁ=to=stεp=bak=nɔw 8
ɑ̃d=mεbə=tatεsə=wə=ʁə=i=was=sy=po=zεd=to=ɡo 12
stʁεɡt=ɛ̃=totə=mut=ɔf=tə=œ̃k=nɔwn 8
ɑ̃d=i=fεll=ɔ̃=pyʁ=po=zə 7

ku=plε=tʁwa 3
nɔw=i=εm=ʒyst=si=tiŋ=ə=ʁə 8
mi=lεɡ=fε=liŋ=to=sy=pɔʁ=mə 8
ɑ̃d=mi=εj=zaʁə=bε=tʁε=jiŋ=mə 8
bi=fi=jiŋ=yp=wit=tə=aʁ 7
i=εm=no=ʒi=viŋ=yp 6
byt=i=εm=kʁi=iŋ=tə=və=ʁi=pɔ=si=bi=li=ti=ɔf=i=u 16
ʁə=a=ʃiŋ=u=fɔʁ=mə 6
was=it=sy=po=zεd=to=εnd=so=kjε=tli 10

pʁe=ʁə=fʁɛ̃=tʁwa 4
ɑ̃d=idɔnə=te=knɔw=ɔw=to=ʃɔw=i=u 9
i=nid=i=u=to=si 6
wa=mi=lip=kan=te=sε 6
i=nid=i=u=to=fil 6
wa=it=mə=ɑ̃ 4
wɛ̃=mi=εj=ɡo=wεt 5

ʁə=fʁɛ̃=tʁwa 3
so=wɔ=nə=te=i=u=ʃɔw=yp 8
if=i=was=kʁa=viŋ=i=uʁpʁə=zɑ̃sə 8
wɔnə=te=i=utakə=məa=ɡɛ̃st=i=u 8
if=i=was=kʁa=viŋ=sa=fə=ti 8

u=tʁo 2
i=kan=te=ʒyst=kʁɔs=zit=u 7
itεsə=stij=a=li=vəɛ̃ə=və=ʁi=bʁəat=i=dʁaw 10
ɑ̃d=i=wɔnə=te=ask=fɔʁ=i=uʁ=tʁyt 9
ko=zə=ɔ̃=li=tʁyt=yʁ=ʁajt 7

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Commentaire Sur La Poesie

05/01/2026 18:52Saoirse

This hits right in the gut, honestly. There’s a proper ache running through it, that mix of wanting someone and knowing it’s a bit mad, a bit dangerous, but still not being able to help yourself. The way you talk about safety and losing it at the same time feels very real, no messing.

I love how it keeps circling back to doubt : "was it even real?". Like your head arguing with your heart at three in the morning. The pre-chorus especially is lovely, that quiet hope clinging on by its fingernails. It’s tender without being mushy, and raw without being dramatic for the sake of it.

All in all, it feels honest as hell. Soft, wrecked, and brave enough to say the quiet bits out loud. There’s a lot of truth in this one.

I took the liberty of leaving my comment in English, seeing as you wrote it that way, hope you don’t mind at all

Chanson Amour
Du 05/01/2026 01:13

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