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Poeme : Have A Little Faith In Me

Poème Ambition
Publié le 02/08/2005 21:21

L'écrit contient 172 mots qui sont répartis dans 5 strophes.

Poete : Emma Lalonde

Have A Little Faith In Me

Have a little faith in me. Believe what I say
When I suggest you need to believe in yourself.
Forget what they all say, and they will watch in dismay
As you put on your own that trophy on your shelf.

Have a little faith in me, I believe in you.
Put your shoes on. It is time for a jog
Because it’s time for you to thrive and get your due.
Go run that last stretch and leave them all in the fog.

Have a little faith in me. Every Man has rights.
If you try hard, respect the freedom of others,
You will reach your goals : the prize for all your fights.
The mudded path will feel like a field of feathers.

So have a little faith in me and believe me
When I say : « All you need is to trust your heart.
Respect yourself and don’t get down on either knee
For you will find the bull’s-eye of your dreams with art. »

01-08-2005
  • Pieds Hyphénique: Have A Little Faith In Me

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    when=i=sug=gest=you=ne=ed=to=be=lie=ve=in=your=self 14
    forget=w=hat=they=all=say=and=they=will=wat=ch=in=dis=may 14
    as=you=put=on=your=own=that=tro=phy=on=your=shelf 12

    have=a=lit=tle=fai=th=in=me=i=be=lie=ve=in=you 14
    put=your=shoes=on=it=is=ti=me=for=a=jog 11
    be=cause=its=ti=me=for=you=to=thri=ve=and=get=your=due 14
    go=run=that=last=stret=ch=and=lea=ve=them=all=in=the=fog 14

    ha=ve=a=lit=tle=fai=th=in=me=eve=ry=man=has=rights 14
    if=you=try=hard=res=pect=the=free=dom=of=o=thers 12
    you=will=rea=ch=your=goals=the=pri=ze=for=all=your=fights 13
    the=mud=ded=pa=th=will=feel=li=ke=a=field=of=fea=thers 14

    so=have=a=lit=tle=fai=th=in=me=and=be=lie=ve=me 14
    when=i=say=all=you=ne=ed=is=to=trust=your=heart 12
    res=pect=your=self=and=dont=get=down=on=ei=ther=k=nee 13
    for=you=will=find=the=bulls=eye=of=your=dreams=wi=th=art 13

    zé=ro=un=tiret=zé=ro=hu=it=ti=ret=deux=mille=cin=q 14
  • Phonétique : Have A Little Faith In Me

    avə a litlə fεt ɛ̃ mə. bəljəvə wa i sε
    wɛ̃ i syɡʒεst iu nid to bəljəvə ɛ̃ iuʁsεlf.
    fɔʁʒε wa te al sε, ɑ̃d te wij watʃ ɛ̃ dismε
    a iu pyt ɔ̃n- iuʁ ɔwn ta tʁɔfi ɔ̃n- iuʁ ʃεlf.

    avə a litlə fεt ɛ̃ mə, i bəljəvə ɛ̃ iu.
    pyt iuʁ ʃoz- ɔ̃. it is timə fɔʁ a ʒɔɡ
    bəkozə itεs timə fɔʁ iu to tʁivə ɑ̃d ʒεt iuʁ dɥ.
    ɡo ʁœ̃ ta last stʁεtʃ ɑ̃d ləavə tεm al ɛ̃ tə fɔɡ.

    avə a litlə fεt ɛ̃ mə. əvəʁi mɑ̃-as ʁajt.
    if iu tʁi-aʁ, ʁεspε tə fʁidɔm ɔf ɔtœʁ,
    iu wij ʁəak iuʁ ɡɔal : tə pʁizə fɔʁ al iuʁ fiɡt.
    tə mydεd pat wij fil likə a fjεld ɔf fəatœʁ.

    so-avə a litlə fεt ɛ̃ mə ɑ̃d bəljəvə mə
    wɛ̃ i sε : « al iu nid is to tʁyst iuʁ əaʁ.
    ʁεspε iuʁsεlf ɑ̃d dɔnte ʒεt dɔwn ɔ̃n- εtœʁ kni
    fɔʁ iu wij fɛ̃d tə bylεs εj ɔf iuʁ dʁəam wit aʁ. »

    zeʁo œ̃ tiʁε zeʁo ɥi tiʁε dø milə sɛ̃k
  • Pieds Phonétique : Have A Little Faith In Me

    a=və=a=li=tlə=fεt=ɛ̃=mə=bə=ljə=və=wa=i=sε 14
    wɛ̃=i=syɡ=ʒεst=i=u=nid=tobə=ljə=və=ɛ̃=i=uʁ=sεlf 14
    fɔʁ=ʒε=wa=te=al=sε=ɑ̃d=te=wij=watʃ=ɛ̃=dis=mε 13
    a=i=u=pyt=ɔ̃=ni=uʁ=ɔwn=ta=tʁɔ=fi=ɔ̃=ni=uʁ=ʃεlf 15

    a=və=a=li=tlə=fεt=ɛ̃mə=i=bə=ljə=və=ɛ̃=i=u 14
    pyt=i=uʁ=ʃo=zɔ̃=it=is=ti=mə=fɔʁ=a=ʒɔɡ 12
    bə=kozə=i=tε=sə=ti=mə=fɔʁ=i=u=to=tʁi=vəɑ̃d=ʒεt=i=uʁ=dɥ 17
    ɡo=ʁœ̃=ta=last=stʁεtʃ=ɑ̃d=lə=a=və=tεm=al=ɛ̃=tə=fɔɡ 14

    a=və=a=li=tlə=fεt=ɛ̃=mə=ə=və=ʁi=mɑ̃-as=ʁajt 14
    if=i=u=tʁi-aʁ=ʁεs=pε=tə=fʁi=dɔm=ɔf=ɔ=tœ=ʁə 14
    i=u=wij=ʁəak=i=uʁ=ɡɔal=tə=pʁi=zə=fɔʁ=al=i=uʁ=fiɡt 15
    tə=my=dεd=pat=wij=fil=li=kə=a=fjεld=ɔf=fə=a=tœʁ 14

    so-a=və=a=li=tlə=fεt=ɛ̃=mə=ɑ̃d=bə=ljə=və=mə 14
    wɛ̃=i=sε=al=i=u=nid=is=to=tʁyst=i=uʁ=ə=aʁ 14
    ʁεs=pε=i=uʁ=sεlf=ɑ̃d=dɔnə=te=ʒεt=dɔwn=ɔ̃=nε=tœʁ=kni 14
    fɔʁ=i=u=wij=fɛ̃d=tə=by=lεsəεj=ɔf=i=uʁ=dʁə=am=wit=aʁ 15

    ze=ʁo=œ̃=ti=ʁε=ze=ʁo=ɥi=ti=ʁε=dø=mi=lə=sɛ̃k 14

PostScriptum

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Commentaires Sur La Poesie


Auteur de Poésie
04/08/2005 15:29Lancu, Cooloost

"the mudded path will feel like a field of feathers"
.......... What a sentence !
Your poem gives one the strength to belive more in oneself to achieve one’s dreams. It boosts me everytime I read it. I gonna keep this one preciously and read it anytime I loose my self confidence facing difficulties in my dreams’ achievements.
As always I am amazed by your english ( I have to improve mine !), and hope you gonna keep on writing for our pleasure.
Admiration from a joker

Auteur de Poésie
04/05/2010 08:32Silent_Innocence

J’aime le thème et les mots choisis, mais ça manque de rythme ~~

J’te propose uen autre version :

Have a little faith in me. please believe what I say !
You need ! You have to; believe in yourself.
Forget what they say, they will watch in dismay
As you put on your own, that trophy on your shelf.

Have a little faith in me, for I believe in you.
Put your shoes on. It’s time for a jog
it’s time for you to thrive and get your due.
Go run that last stretch and leave them all in the fog.

Have a little faith in me. Every man has rights.
Try hard and respect their freedom,
You will reach your goals: the prize for all your fights.
And the mudded path will feel like a field of feathers.

So have a little faith in me, believe in me
When I say: "All you need is to trust your heart.
Respect yourself and don’t get down on either knee
For you will find the bull’s-eye of your dreams with art."

Okay comme tu peux voir j’ai pas changé grand chose ~

Je viens de me rendre compte que c’est très dur de trouver des rimes en -elf, très instructif cette tentative de re-rythmage.

Ca manque de rythme à certains autres passages mais y’a pas moyen de reformuler sans changer les quatre vers et le but c’est pas de réécrire le poème donc j’ai laissé tomber ^^