Poème:Nothing In The Sky ? ! ? !
Le Poème
An angel was comming for me
But it hits the window
Like a little bird
And the scenery around laughed at him
So he woke up and said
You will need to explain it in front of god
I went in heaven where jesus was laid
In this room only made of bed
I would like to sleep in it
But he demanded me to sit
So i turned around and looked at his face
It was nothing but the wind
That is slapping the clouds
I laugh at god
I laugh at everything that is suposed to be important
We are slaves, we are chained
They have the key, i dont want it
But it hits the window
Like a little bird
And the scenery around laughed at him
So he woke up and said
You will need to explain it in front of god
I went in heaven where jesus was laid
In this room only made of bed
I would like to sleep in it
But he demanded me to sit
So i turned around and looked at his face
It was nothing but the wind
That is slapping the clouds
I laugh at god
I laugh at everything that is suposed to be important
We are slaves, we are chained
They have the key, i dont want it
PostScriptum
la religion c’est assez bizare
Poète Darkvid
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Syllabes Hyphénique: Nothing In The Sky ? ! ? !
an=an=gel=was=com=ming=for=me 8but=it=hits=the=win=dow 6
li=ke=a=lit=tle=bird 6
and=the=s=ce=ne=ry=a=round=lau=ghed=at=him 12
so=he=wo=ke=up=and=said 7
you=will=ne=ed=to=ex=plain=it=in=front=of=god 12
i=went=in=hea=ven=w=he=re=je=sus=was=laid 12
in=this=ro=om=on=ly=ma=de=of=bed 10
i=would=li=ke=to=s=le=ep=in=it 10
but=he=de=man=ded=me=to=sit 8
so=i=tur=ned=a=round=and=loo=ked=at=his=face 12
it=was=no=thing=but=the=wind 7
that=is=s=lap=ping=the=clouds 7
i=laugh=at=god 4
i=laugh=at=e=ve=ry=thing=that=is=su=po=sed=to=beim=por=tant 16
we=a=re=sla=ves=we=a=re=chai=ned 10
they=ha=ve=the=key=i=dont=want=it 9
Phonétique : Nothing In The Sky ? ! ? !
ɑ̃ ɑ̃ʒεl was kɔmiŋ fɔʁ məbyt it it tə wɛ̃dɔw
likə a litlə biʁ
ɑ̃d tə sənəʁi aʁund loɡεd a im
so ə wɔkə yp ɑ̃d sε
iu wij nid to εksplɛ̃ it ɛ̃ fʁɔ̃ ɔf ɡɔd
i wɑ̃ ɛ̃ əavɛ̃ wəʁə ʒəzys was lε
ɛ̃ ti ʁum ɔ̃li madə ɔf bεd
i wuld likə to slip ɛ̃ it
byt ə dəmɑ̃dεd mə to sit
so i tyʁnεd aʁund ɑ̃d lukεd a is fasə
it was nɔtiŋ byt tə wɛ̃d
ta is slapiŋ tə klud
i loɡ a ɡɔd
i loɡ a əvəʁitiŋ ta is sypozεd to bə ɛ̃pɔʁtɑ̃
wə aʁə slavə, wə aʁə ʃεnεd
te-avə tə ke, i dɔ̃ wɑ̃ it
Syllabes Phonétique : Nothing In The Sky ? ! ? !
ɑ̃=ɑ̃=ʒεl=was=kɔ=miŋ=fɔʁ=mə 8byt=it=it=tə=wɛ̃=dɔw 6
li=kə=a=li=tlə=biʁ 6
ɑ̃d=tə=sə=nə=ʁi=a=ʁund=lo=ɡεd=a=im 11
so=ə=wɔ=kə=yp=ɑ̃d=sε 7
i=u=wij=nid=to=εk=splɛ̃=it=ɛ̃=fʁɔ̃=ɔf=ɡɔd 12
i=wɑ̃=ɛ̃əa=vɛ̃=wə=ʁə=ʒə=zys=was=lε 10
ɛ̃=ti=ʁum=ɔ̃=li=madə=ɔf=bεd 8
i=wuld=li=kə=to=slip=ɛ̃=it 8
byt=ə=də=mɑ̃=dεd=mə=to=sit 8
so=i=tyʁ=nεd=a=ʁund=ɑ̃d=lu=kεd=a=isfasə 11
it=was=nɔ=tiŋ=byt=tə=wɛ̃d 7
ta=is=sla=piŋ=tə=klud 6
i=loɡ=a=ɡɔd 4
i=loɡ=aə=və=ʁi=tiŋ=ta=is=sy=po=zεd=to=bəɛ̃=pɔʁ=tɑ̃ 15
wəaʁə=sla=və=wə=a=ʁə=ʃε=nεd 8
te-avə=tə=ke=i=dɔ̃=wɑ̃=it 8
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Commentaires Sur La Poesie
30/08/2005 11:45Cindy Limpens
J’aime ton poème il est assez interessant sur le sujet et tu as bien su le mettre par écrit. Pour ma part, je ne pense pas qu’il y ai quoi que ce soit dans le ciel. Si Dieu existait vraiment, il n’y aurait pas autant de m**** sur Terre, je pense. Du moins, n’est-il pas décrit comme le père qui veille sur ses enfants ?
Enfin, ce n’est que mon avis... En tout cas pour ton poeme, je pense que tout le monde sera d’accord pour dire qu’il est très beau :)(F)
30/08/2005 16:18Lancu, Cooloost
We aren’t supposed to believe in other’s beliefs... Believe in what you believe. It might be a god, love or friendship or nature and why not to believe in mankind ? We can change our future, doesn’t it make us some kind of God ?
Poème Religion
Du 30/08/2005 04:22
L'écrit contient 114 mots qui sont répartis dans 3 strophes.